A Sudden Movement
By Becci Norris
Introduction
A long time ago, probably in Tudor times, there was a boy called Timmy. Now Timmy was an ordinary boy who lived up top. Only the rich people lived underground, they say the air is better and it's safer under there.
Today Timmy was bored, he couldn't play outside because it was tremendously stormy weather. Timmy had 2 sisters and lived with his mother. His mother was 37 years old and was called Mary. Timmy's mum was great apart from the fact that she had a dog that always wee'd on him! Timmy was 9 years old and loved adventure story's, everyday he would come up with a new one, well almost every day but his favourite one was when he had to escape from some dinosaurs in 10 minutes flat! He longed for this story to come true some day…
Chapter 1 - Lightening
Timmy thought it was better outside now so he went to play out. Unfortunately for him it wasn't and he got struck with a lightening bolt and fainted…
When he woke up he was in the prehistoric ages with dinosaurs ! He was the only one there, but then he realised he was being licked by Floss (his mum's dog). The suddenly Floss started rapping! "My name's not Floss, oh yeah, oh yeah. My name is Flo Rida!" It didn't take Timmy long to realise that he was in one of the stories that he had made… which meant he only had 10 minutes left to escape from the dinosaurs! But there was no sign of any dinosaurs anywhere!
ROAR!
"oh no!" said Timmy!
Chapter 2 - 10 Minutes Left
Timmy grabbed Floss aka Flo Rida and ran to the waterfall which was just through the forest. I'd better hurry up Timmy thought otherwise the dinosaur will get me and eat me all up! When Timmy got to the waterfall he found a huge rock and hid behind it. Because Floss was obsessed with rapping he started scribbling in his notepad, his pencil snapped just as the dinosaur arrived and he started heading towards them!
The dinosaur was tall and thin with huge spikes on his back. He had massive teeth with bloodshot eyes.
Chapter 3 - 9 Minutes Left
Just be very still Timmy thought. Timmy was learning about dinosaurs at school and he knew that he could only see you if you were moving. So the dinosaur went in another direction. "We need to get to the cave!" Timmy whispered to Floss, "that's were the crystal is to get us back." Timmy looked at his watch and realised he didn't have 9 minutes left because the school time was 5 minutes faster which meant he had 4 minutes left! So they headed to the cave…
Chapter 4 - 3 Minutes Left
Timmy and Floss approached the mountain that the cave was in. It was small, dark and full of cobwebs in there, but the crystal is buried in the floor, a bit like a pirate treasure chest because it has an X over it.
When Timmy and Floss reached the cave they were both terrified. They were thinking about going back but then saw the dinosaur coming so stopped still. Eventually it walked past them.
Chapter 5 - 2 Minutes Left
The dinosaur started to head in another direction. Since he was standing on the X Timmy (how clever he was) threw a stone at him, so he headed out the cave. Unfortunately for him he missed and the stone bounced off the wall straight onto his head and he fainted….
Chapter 6 - Back Home
Eventually Timmy woke up he was at home, then he realised it had all been a dream! But a very fascinating dream though!
